Here's what makes an excellent pissing closeup for me:
-bright studio lighting to bring out color in the stream and enable both low ISO and high shutter speed
-low ISO to eliminate any grainyness
-fast shutter speed to stop motion in the stream
So few photographers do these things when shooting pissing closeups, especially the last point. Shooting pissing closeups with regular shutter speeds leads to the stream being blurred, which is similar to how the human eye sees it. However, closeups where the motion of the stream is stopped are spectacular. You can see much more detail through the camera than with the naked eye.
I can imagine why there are so few shots like this - they are difficult both for the model and photographer. To get that type of shot, you have to put a high end camera and lens on a tripod with lighting right up in a model's crotch. That can be a lot of equipment. Then you ask her to pee, and hope she doesn't get it on that lens and camera body costing thousands of dollars just inches away.
A few photographers have done this, with stunning results. The best pissing closeups online today are the scenes shot by photographer Alicia Silver on the ATK sites. Her closeups are detailed, well lit, without grainyness, and she stops the motion in the pee streams. Alicia is retired as a photographer, but her scenes are still on the ATK sites.
The only other photographer who consistently excelled with pee closeups was Frannie Adams. I feel like I go on about Frannie sometimes, to no end, but I just can't get over how excellent her work was, and yet how relatively little recognition her site got. Bodyparts.biz was the top glamour photography site in my book.
Anyway, that is the sad state of affairs with extreme pee closeups. The two best photographers are retired, Frannie's work is offline, and even though her first scenes were in 2007, no one has since done better.
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