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| BigBobxxx Senior Member 2681 Posts 5/04 | Just watched Bee Spanx in The Blowjob Adventures of Dr. Fellatio #16. We're getting to what is looking like the climax of the scene... The stud is hard-as-a-rock, and Bee is really tugging it hard... Bee keeps moving her face into position (clearly she thinks he's ready to pop)... But, no! The stud takes his cock away from her, and starts pounding it himself... For 54-seconds (an eternity at this point)! Then, he hands it back to her (he tells her "take it"). In lick-lick+eight-quick-strokes, he's -- finally -- blowing a load. My point is that, the entire 54-seconds of the stud pulling his own dick could have -- and should have -- been edited out. I can tell you that, this edit could have been done seamlessly (and that's based on just the footage I'm looking at that made the final cut). Instead, because of poor editing, or knowingly who-gives-a-fuck, an otherwise decent scene loses most of the heat it had going. Why am I re-stating the obvious now? Notice all the "how to save porn" and "what's wrong with porn" type threads lately? Granted, this is a 1999 scene, but nothing ever changes. Make better porn by doing the best job you can with what you have. It costs nothing more to edit a scene well (unless we're now using the stockroom guys for minimum-wage). [Link] |
| presto_nl Member 103 Posts 3/09 | |
| Dubious_Leftovers Senior Member And on that fateful day, the hatred consumed me... 1423 Posts 3/09 | Good editing is paramount in a scene's success. At the culmination of the scene, it should come across to the viewer as the absolute height of the momentum and heat built up over the preceding action. Long footage of the guy desperately whacking off (often made worse by the cameraman PANNING to a guy's struggling-to-cum face - like we want to see that?!) goes to completely destroy that momentum, and cause annoyance to the viewer. These are the very reasons that editing software exists, and why there are occupation titles held by trained people called "editors". Ultimately, it comes down to lesser studios not giving a shit about final output. Doubt there's anything more to it. |
| TedtheBellhop Member 767 Posts 6/09 | In terms of what I would like to see in editing is chopping these 30-40 minute scenes down to 15-20. I understand that will never happen because of the expenses associated. |
| BigBobxxx Senior Member 2681 Posts 5/04 | The reason for 30-40 minute scenes (where a well-edited 15-20 minute scene used to be the norm), has, IMHO, everything to do with selling porn-by-the-minute via streaming video on the Internet. Good editing is virtually seamless (just like the "natural look" make-up jobs some women master). "Less editing" doesn't mean no editing, does it? I believe that 54-seconds of the stud jerking himself off needs to be edited. If nothing else gets edited, studs jerking themselves off is right at the top of the list. Particularly when it detracts from the climax of the scene. BTW, I do a lot of editing of porn for my own enjoyment. I am frequently astounded at how a good editing job can turn dull scenes into whackable material -- especially leading up to the cumshot. |
| TedtheBellhop Member 767 Posts 6/09 | I guess we'll just have to agree to disagree on the 54 seconds, of course that's in theory as I haven't seen that film. However, I think that's awesome that you've taken the initiative to do something about it! |
| rashidnz Senior Member Eve Angel 4645 Posts 12/03 | a similar topic/thread just started up at the viv thomas forum where they asked what makes a good straight sex scene, Of course there is no agreement on what everyone likes there does seem to be agreement on what was not wanted though and seeing the guy jerking off and making faces was very high on the list of Stop Showing us this Crap Have the Girl Finish the Job she started(If I want to see a guy jerking off I will Look in the Mirror) NO Need to see the guys face its obvious he is Happy,He is shooting Cum out show us the Girls Face and her reaction and show the post cum head clean up and swallowing |
| duefuss Member Not a shred of evidence exists in favor of the idea that life is serious - Brendan Gill 723 Posts 4/09 | |
| NewRomancer Deactivated User under THEIR avatar 738 Posts 7/08 | |
| Boob Enthusiast Member 91 Posts 3/08 | I've recently started editing my own porn. With simple editing software, I can now remove all the stuff I hate: male spitting, closeups of male faces, males jerking off, camera angles from between or thru the male's legs--i.e. crack n' sack shots, reverse cowgirl and other unrealistic & uncomfortable looking positions, etc. Out of a standard 20-30 minute porn scene, I consider myself lucky if I get 3-5 minutes' worth of whackable material. It's usually difficult to make it flow smoothly when I cut so much out, but that's still better than trying to sit through all the usual bad camera angles and sex positions. Edited by - BigBobxxx on 10/21/2009 5:57:47 PM |
| presto_nl Member 103 Posts 3/09 | You are stealing original content. This is not something to be proud of. You damage producers, pornstars, you damage everybody in the porn industry. When you think that most of the material is crap anyway stop watching it and do something useful with your life. Note to all... I don't want to see any further conversation regarding illegal downloads (and quoting those comments that start down that path). presto_nl your comments are fine, however, Boob Enthusiast's inappropriate remarks have been deleted. ANY further discussion of illegal downloads, etc. will be deleted. And, I mean the entire post. This thread is regarding editing -- particularly how the studios edit their movies and scenes. -- BigBobxxx Edited by - BigBobxxx on 10/21/2009 6:40:23 PM |
| Aplus Senior Member 1431 Posts 5/05 | |
| BrekkyDJ Member Australia 246 Posts 10/06 | I'm not a fan of seeing a guys jerk off, or seeing his facial expression - dare I say it, it's like watching a gay men's movie - NO THANKS The one thing I hate the most is when a girl is getting pounded, you're enjoying the scene and about to blow your love juice, then you see a full close up of the guys straining face - talk about a way to ruin the scene! Can we just focus on the girl please? That's what we pay our $$$ to see. BrekkyDJ (With slow internet in Australia) |
| Johnothan Pedak Senior Member Catastrophe 1594 Posts 6/07 | |
| ninja1 Senior Member 2939 Posts 1/08 | |
| BigBobxxx Senior Member 2681 Posts 5/04 | I guess it helps them slam something together quickly (as opposed to real editing) Since 99-44/100ths of the time porn is being filmed with a single camera, this often leads to unintended poor results. One of the worst, IMHO, is missing the start of the cumshot (or its related fuck-up: needing to crossfade into the cumshot already in progress) |
| ninja1 Senior Member 2939 Posts 1/08 | Edited by - ninja1 on 10/22/2009 2:47:32 PM |
| fotomatt Member 78 Posts 8/08 | But I do agree that it's almost always better (for me) visually to watch the girl bring it to a pop. The main reason is that it gives the appearance that the girl is more "into" the sex and actually wants that pop shot all over her face because she's in control of that cock. There can be some exceptions to that. Such as when there are multiple girls in the scene and the guy needs to nut on all their faces - it's just going to be too difficult for the girls to control that kind of action. Or if it's a scene where the guy is in a male dominating role and is "subjecting" the girl to himself. Some of this could be taken care of in directing also. One of my pet peeves in porn is how the facial comes to be. A guy will be pounding away on a girl, and all of a sudden he's ready to blow his load, and so he jumps up, she has to roll over, get off the bed & onto her knees into "standard cum shot position" (and while doing so you can see her looking around the room catching the eyes of the director/cameraman/lighting guy) and take the cumshot on her face. Often times she'll throw in a few out of place comments that are soo faked, such as "oh yeah baby, I want you to cum on my face). I'd rather the guy just pull out and blow his load on whatever body part is there - ass, pussy, stomach, tits... It would flow much better. Otherwise, if the director wants a facial, then the director needs to let the actor know that if he's getting close to losing it, switch to a position that allows for a more natural facial to occur. But alas, despite all my gripes, I'm still going to watch it. After all, it's the hot chicks doing all those wonderfully nasty things that keeps bringing me back, no matter how bad the acting, directing, or editing. |
| Rosco Fuji Deactivated User On the licking stick, Mr. Magic Dick! 3309 Posts 2/09 |
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