The start sounds fine. I'll read it when it gets posted.

Just remember that a review is your opinion on the movie. What you liked in it, and what you didn't like, and the why of both.

You justify why it was good, or bad, in your opinion, and then it is up to the reader to make their own adjustments in deciding to buy/rent the film or not. If you are consistent in your personal evaluation/opinion of movies than people can make their adjustments.

For example, there may be something in a movie that you thought was terrible, but someone reading the review can say "wow, I gotta get that one"

I look forward to reading the review, and your English is coming across just fine.

DenverDon

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I think that your review will come out just fine, judging by the little snippet you showed us.
Although I am not an expert on writing reviews, I have read my fair share and base alot of my purchases on the reviews that I have read.
One suggestion I would make would be to 'define your own personal porn likes and dislikes', in general. Maybe include this at the start of all of your future reviews. I find that when this is included by a reviewer, I can really appreciate their rating of the film far more, particularly if they share the same/similar tastes as I do.
I know what your personal tastes are from the post you made earlier today i.e. the raincoaters thread. It would be useful, however, to include this in your reviews for the new members and guests that may not be familiar with your personal tastes.
Off the top of my head, I believe 'FacIan' includes this in his reviews. Maybe check out other reviewers for added inspiration.

Good Luck

SAMURAI DAI

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Your review has been posted.

Nice one.

You were explicit enough with what you liked, and didn't like that I feel someone reading the review has enough information to make their own decisions whether to obtain it or not.

DenverDon

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Now I sort of proud: Here it is.

I tried write about film nobody wrote before. Also not in IAFD. Tried to give new information for those fighting trough <that strange Russians thoughts>. At least is film with Nikki Anderson and both Hungarian W/Vandas. So nice girls garanteed.

Please if you read, do comment and critizise. I want my tastes be clear visible, but I also want be of some help, too. So many people help me out here all the time...

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This is a very good review. I found it informative and timely, because this is one of the DVDs I was considering renting. Now I will definitely do so!

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