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Smidgey
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Posted - Feb 3 2001 : 9:49AM

Greetings...

I'm Smidgey, a newly-registered member, probably planning on staying for a while (I love porn, y'see, and as for my fav. pornstars...you'll find I'm a HUGE fan of Jenna Jameson and Sylvia Saint!!!)...

I'm sorry to see I missed a live chat with Jenna some time ago, but I've read the transcript and wished I could have been there...

Anyways, the favour (as in the subject)...

I'm a big fan of Jenna, but I've never actually watched a PORN "VIDEO" TAPE...however, I download porn mpegs all the time. I've seen at least 30 different scenes of Jenna, I'm sure. Yes, you might find it lousy, but in my area I can't get hold of a proper video...

(That's the UK, btw!)

Anyways, the favour...I'm interested in writing porn myself, and I would to know if anybody here could possibly send me any porn movie transcripts (movies starring Jenna, that is). Otherwise, if anybody has any videos and they wouldn't mind writing some samples of the type of dialogue involved in porn movies?
(I've got a pretty good idea of the sex works...LOL)...
But the only speech I've heard is in a scene from "WICKED WEAPON" I downloaded in which after Jenna has been splashed in the face with cum, she begins demanding "Why the fuck did u come on my face?"...

Obviously, I expect dialogue in porn movies to be minimal (we don't pay to jack off to speech, do we, guys?) but, anyways, I would really appreciate the above favour...

Cya next time,

Smidgey

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Posted - Feb 3 2001 : 10:56AM
I have no clue where to find that sort of thing, Smidgey. I'd suggest trying to find some more plot-heavy movies to watch now that the UK is starting to open up a little better. Good Luck and Welcome to Adult DVD Talk.
Smidgey
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Posted - Feb 3 2001 : 11:33AM

Thanks all the same, k?
dumblonde
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Posted - Feb 3 2001 : 11:35AM
Welcome Smidgey! Love the name, BTW.
While I normally fast-forward through any dialog, after reading your request, I did manage to
keep my finger off the button long enough to give you a sample of 'porn dialog' here:

Stud: "Ooooohhh, suck my dick, bitch. Oh yeah, that's it. Suck it harder!
Starlet: "Who's that?"
Stud: "That's my buddy, you wanna suck his too, don't ya?"
Starlet: "Oh yeah! But first, I want you BOTH to fuck me!"

Here, Stud1 lies down on his back, Starlet gets on top, and inserts first log-splitter in her pussy. Stud2, waiting in the wings and masturbating, approaches and carefully tops the
dogpile, without actually touching bottom Stud anywhere, for fear THAT might appear gay ;-)
Still masturbating to make sure that pile-driver's stiff enough for the insertion, he makes it in,
only to be bucked off as soon as Stud1 starts moving. Just like in rodeo, an 8 second ride
here is considered a success. But back to the dialog:

Starlet: Ohgod, ohgod, ohgod, ohgod ohgod, ohgod, OHGOD OHGOD OHGOD OHGOD!!
YES!! Fuck me, fuck me harder!! OHGOD OHGOD OHGOD That's it! OOOHHHHGOOOD

Well, you get the idea Smidgey..10-15 pages of this, and you got winner! Good luck...

punjab1
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Posted - Feb 3 2001 : 4:37PM
I thnk the dialouge is the best part, yea we all know it's gonna end up with butt nekkid sex but the interesting part is how it comes about.

Is cable being installed, is there a job inteview about to happen, are we in the locker room after cheerleading practice. I think once the stars are fully nekkid the flair is gone. The lead in is where the actions at!!

 
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Posted - Feb 4 2001 : 12:13AM
Welcome
Smidgey
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Posted - Feb 4 2001 : 2:11AM

Thank you all!

And thanks for the help there, dumblonde and punjab1.

You might wanna wait a short while before I start writing submitting some of my new samples to the forum...

punjab1
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Posted - Feb 4 2001 : 7:50AM
smidgey - I'd love to get a sample of what you're putting together. Post something and as you've seen - poeple will give you their input whether you want it or not!!

Really, though, this seems like a good group, and I think every one should have some advice or at least an opinion to share.

HoustonDon
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Posted - Feb 4 2001 : 9:01AM
Welcome, one of the problems with "writing" for porn movies is expressed rather well by DB. On the other hand, some porn movies have very good acting and screenplays but...

Keep in mind that the vast majority of porn performers don't act well, don't read scripts (and the ad libs suck most of the time), and often barely show up on time-often don't-never having even looked at their lines. If you watch some of the behind the scenes footage on some of the high end movies, listen to the commentary tracks, or even read off of the wonderful Mike Quasar's website, you'll find that the people who can act (don't get me wrong-some are great) are few and far between.

If you can convey your message in an easy to read format, on about the size of a fortune cookie fortune paper, you may be headed for greatness.

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Posted - Feb 4 2001 : 9:23AM
Smidgey

A couple things to keep in mind - limit the number of people in each scene and limit the number of locations.

Also you may want to drop Rog of rogreviews.com a note as he has written a few scripts that were made into movies for a variety of studios.

Smidgey
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Posted - Feb 4 2001 : 10:59AM

Thanks again for more advice (and the website!)...

Cya for now,

Smidgey




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