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howie
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144 Posts
11/03
Posted - Jun 20 2004 : 10:00PM
My first ever review (Sorority Splash) is now up. Lately some posters have suggested writing reviews to alert fellow ADT'ers of any issues/turnoffs. And I wanted to contribute to the forum other than posts.

I appreciate the reviewers here at ADT and their reviews have helped in making my purchasing decisions.

I would love to hear some feedback; shorten/lenghten the review, more scene description, more sarcasm.

Thanks.

Coyote
Member

Daylight Savings Time, is it really Necessary?
972 Posts
3/04
Posted - Jun 20 2004 : 10:50PM
I would say just do what you want and how you like it. Don't try to make your reviews like everyone elses. Seems to me your on the right track. But there is nothing better than practice. The more you write the more you'll find things you want to change and such.

PS- Looking back at my first review (ass worship 5) I see that I have changed my style quite drastically mixing things up and well I'm not sure but whatever it is I like my newer reviews a lot more.

Edited by - coyote22 on 6/20/2004 10:52:03 PM

mr. october
Member

memphis
109 Posts
9/03
Posted - Jun 20 2004 : 10:52PM
good job.

i think your scene descriptions are fine. but you can always add more, i think more detail is never a bad thing.

christopher streams
Member

419 Posts
2/04
Posted - Jun 21 2004 : 1:06AM
I shot the movie and I think you did a fine job describing what happened. I would like to comment on Aria in scene 2, she was only cast to be in one scene but just couldn't help herself and jumped in to that scene for fun. So sometimes what ends up as a - started out as a +. I do think if it was just Aria and Shopia the scene would have went to another level.
howie
Member

144 Posts
11/03
Posted - Jun 21 2004 : 7:36AM
Chris:

Thanks for your comments. I can't blame Aria for wanting to join the scene since Sophia and Jennifer are so hot.

Any desire to eventually direct? In the BTS, BF was leaning on you for directorial suggestions and you appeared to be an old pro at it; background scenery, people placement, pacing.

 
christopher streams
Member

419 Posts
2/04
Posted - Jun 22 2004 : 5:29AM
Yes, I directed Internal cumbustion #4 (with Tegan on the box). There is a new company coming out soon that will have me directing a couple movie a month for them. There are 5 movies in the can right now and as soon as I get the ok I will start posting all kinds of stuff. All I can say now is I think it will be a big hit. Great boxes, great cast, great sex, great editing.
howie
Member

144 Posts
11/03
Posted - Jun 22 2004 : 6:44PM
Great news, Chris. I'll be on the lookout. If you are in need of any un-biased reviews, come look me up.

BTW, it looks like Selena beat me to the Nightmare review. I can't possibly follow-up that up; she rocks with her artful reviews.

christopher streams
Member

419 Posts
2/04
Posted - Jun 23 2004 : 12:16AM
Go ahead give it a shot.
cv
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My reviews[/url]
594 Posts
7/03
Posted - Jun 23 2004 : 12:29AM
I have one main comment to add: do not assume that readers have watched the same movies as you.

You have written this review and made many comments relative to Disturbed, Buttslammers, Nightmare. The only time you can really expect people to have seen specific movies is when the film being reviewed is part of a short series (e.g., Private's Tatiana Trilogy) where the storyline is directly connected.

If understanding your review relies on the reader having seen a specific set of movies, then you have effectively cut down your readership enormously. It's one thing to expect porn viewers to have seen a Seymour Butts movies; it's totally something else to expect some to have seen someone's directorial debut. Enough said on this topic.

I also advise caution when using acronyms. You have used a couple that I only recognize because of a very recent thread discussing them.

Good luck.

Coyote
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Daylight Savings Time, is it really Necessary?
972 Posts
3/04
Posted - Jun 23 2004 : 2:18AM
I wouldn't shy away from reviewing a film just because it has already been done. Selena does a wonderful job but you shouldn't be intimidated by her style. If you want to write up a review then do so. Different people see different things. Perhaps you don't like Nightmare and thus point out why and that way people who like your tastes will be aware of the differences. It could mean the difference between buying and watching. I know I'm doing a review on Nightmare when I get it!
howie
Member

144 Posts
11/03
Posted - Jun 24 2004 : 1:07AM
Coyote:
Thanks for the push. I just submitted my review for Nightmare. The movie was great and that helps in preparing a review.
Coyote
Member

Daylight Savings Time, is it really Necessary?
972 Posts
3/04
Posted - Jun 24 2004 : 2:10AM
Well great! Can't wait to read it!



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