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DuxRyu
Member


USA
44 Posts
11/06
Posted - Dec 4 2006 : 8:02PM
Have any of you ever thought to yourself (and not in any disrespect to the writers/directors) if I were to have written/directed that scene, it would have been hotter?

Now, everyone has their own tastes and things that 'turn them on,' but would you like a forum board dedicated to what each of us thinks is a HOT scene? I'm not asking you to rewrite some old porn scene from an existing movie, but come up with a creative new scene in a paragaph or two. Maybe it will help some of the writers/directors out there turn out some better stuff?

Just an idea. Happy to kick things off in my next post if you think it would be fun/useful.

I looked at Cafe Flesh 2 as my first try at watching a movie recommended by some on here. I'm sure I'll do better as I get to know everyone's tastes, but that film was, B-A-D.

OK, off to read more posts to see if anyone liked something more similar to Borderline so I can find another good movie.

six demon bag
Member

206 Posts
10/06
Posted - Dec 5 2006 : 7:33AM
There is already a Story Time forum on here, though I never go to it.

I'm still waiting for someone to do a porno version of that Jessica Alba movie Honey.

Dracula
Member

Women's necks are too damned sexy for me!
756 Posts
3/06
Posted - Dec 7 2006 : 11:31AM
All the time!!!! It's the same scenes, the same camera angles, the same positions time and time again.

I would work a little harder on creating new positions, have the porn stars be a little more energetic (which might come naturally if there's some variety), and break away from the norm.

I personally like to see more woman than guy, more female faces and necks than hair covering both, and more inverted positions. I'm growing tired of the re-runs with different actors.

The industry charges the most for films, offers the least in customer service and in creative effort, and they don't care to improve. It's amazing how they stay in business. There are exceptions, but the vast majority of porn these days leaves us begging for better.

Could also use more vampire films where the women get bit, not the guys!


cubesnake
Senior Member

3858 Posts
10/02
Posted - Dec 7 2006 : 6:39PM
Hi,

Well, i can only imagine what it takes to film a scene or an entire movie. The things that bug me the most are camera people that have no feeling for a hot pose. Maybe the director tells them to shoot it in this or that way i don´t know. I´ve seen a lot of scenes with hot girls with the most adorable bodies and then have a cameraguy that almost goes into macromode . If you have beautiful women with hot curves i like to see it period !!! The reason we get to see the same positions all the time is probably due to camera angel purposes. For me, if i had to film a reverse cowgirl position i´d make sure the girl would always put her bare feet (or socks with holes :) )onto the guys knees ! If you film scenes with buttplugs ... it´s almost everytime ruined by the speed that the plug is being inserted or played with after that. If the girl needs more time to adjust then give it to them ! A butt plug has to go in slow until this point where you think it can´t go further and then you give it the final push and the spincter does the rest I don´t care for this whole ATM thing ... have the girl play with the toys before they go in . Also have the girls do a lot more bretzel positions or at least have them grab their ankles and if they can have them or the guy who is fucking them lick their toes. And finaly if it´s time for the guy to come let the girl tell the guy she wants him to give her his load/cum/spunk whatever she calls it to swallow and/or play with but lets hear those words in an erotic way that should be enough for most guys to pop if not have the girl do the jerking and let her look into his eyes while shes doing it if a finger/toy in the guys ass helps go for it. The maybe best popscene (i can think of right now) is with Monica Sweetheart and Peter North from (i guess) Deep Throt this 20 ... not one ounce missed and everything delivered on her tongue

Well, enough for now.

Cube

Edited by - cubesnake on 12/7/2006 6:47:41 PM

mrbluelouboyle All-Star Supporter
All-Star Member

mrbluelouboyle and Alexis Tae
1334 Posts
12/03
Posted - Dec 8 2006 : 3:50PM
I agree with you cubesnake. I like to see full female bodies, from head to toe on the screen.
I also like to see more of standing mish, where the male picks up the female facing him. I like to see the female get phucked in mid-air.
Also standing 69 with the male holding the female upside down.
Above all back off with the camera. Sometimes standing 12 feet back with the cam you can frame the entire shot , including the whole bodies of the participants.
 
Pagoda
Senior Member

Thread Killer
1747 Posts
10/05
Posted - Dec 8 2006 : 5:12PM
I've never seen a shower scene done well. That's a hot fantasy, but it never quite translates on screen. It's probably tough to film one with the steam and all that. The closest I've seen to my satisfaction was some Vivid scene between Monique Alexander and Rocco. They were in a shower that had clear glass on three sides. One good thing about it was that the director let Monique get her hair wet and wear very little make-up, so it looked believable that she was actually taking a shower. Unfortunately, the chemistry between Rocco and her was tepid, and the sex was boring.
DuxRyu
Member

USA
44 Posts
11/06
Posted - Dec 16 2006 : 4:06AM
Picture This:

A woman comes home from a long day at work as a research scientist studying voyeurism for her doctorate. She hears some noise from the beach house behind her apartment like a party with loud music. She goes over to the window to her telescope to check it out and in a few seconds sees a woman spinning around playfully in bra and panties and then bends over to remove them half way. (She unbuttons her white dress shirt a bit)

Continue through telescope

Ends up there is another woman also in the beach house and they start kissing. Removes her sundress for the other woman and playfully skips away. Darn, scene over? Nope.
They rush back into the room one hanging onto the other's panties stretched out behind her and then tears them off her.

They end up on the floor...begins to eat her out from behind
sexy back/ass shot

More heavy breathing from the voyeur/removes her top half way down her shoulders

continues to watch

First girl begins to look behind her and motions for someone else to come over...enter man

they both begin to strip him naked and suck him

now even more heavy breathing from voyeur/shot of her taking down her panties some and then grabbing her nipple
while holding onto the telescope

her boyfriend walks into the same room behind her without her noticing

her watches her for a while, while she watches the threesome next door

he then comes up behind her and gently takes her tits in his hands from behind

she is a bit startled, but is too turned on to care, continues watching

threesome move to couch and begin fucking, one girl slapping the ass of the guy while he fucks the other

voyeur begins grinding pelvis into telescope stand...

this continues...then she says, fuck me

you get the idea...

zorge
Member

278 Posts
8/06
Posted - Dec 16 2006 : 8:08AM
okay, 2 cute chicks, one dude who should be attractive too (for the ladies). somewhere along the line one of the girls ends up with panties over her face as the dude does her ass while she's on her back, the other girl then squirts all over her face. then some other romantic things happen until everyone has some orgasms.

I think that scene has yet to happen, it might be a new scientific discovery, and it would be hott, with two t's.

DuxRyu
Member

USA
44 Posts
11/06
Posted - Oct 21 2008 : 6:11PM
Anyone seen a scene so well done in the past few years only that it made them almost climax in their pants?
You know, like that woman on the subway reading the erotic novel that gets all flushed and her knees get closer and closer until she crosses them and thinks no one notices?
Wish I had. Maybe the movie Burn will have a scene like that for me. To each his or her own.
Dux
whitetan
Member

10 Posts
5/07
Posted - Oct 21 2008 : 7:09PM
I like this tread but I would add to it by asking; What if I have a great idea for a Porn Script? Does the Porn industry accept scripts the way the movie industry does? And I know submitting a script and actually having it made into a movie is a longshot but I believe the woman who wrote 'Juno' succeeded somewhere along those lines.
In my opinion porn is badly in need of some new ideas. Why not take a chance on some new writers or directors?
Digmen1
Member

629 Posts
7/07
Posted - Oct 24 2008 : 5:18PM
I have a couple of ideas for some porn movies totally new, but I am not going to tell anyone unless they get me to write their script and help direct it !
I like many of you, love some things and dislike others, there are so many threads on here that mention these things, yet the directors do not read them or take up what we are saying.
Here are my likes and requests
More Pildrivers
More girls wanking the guys dick utill they come
Nice shots of girls standing up sucking the guys dick who is sitting down with the shot taken from her back so that you can see her face on his dick, and her ass and her thighs (you have to see all 3 things)
Longer shots of the cum on the girls face or mouth
When changing positions, I want to see the change actually happening.
Here is my main dislikes
Guys wanking onto the girls face (let her do it)
Regards
Digby
Dan
Senior Member

2056 Posts
6/07
Posted - Oct 25 2008 : 10:42AM
I think film-makers can improve the way porn acting looks and sounds by copying some of the film-making techniques from Bollywood.
These Indian film-makers basically make a sound-track first with lines being said and sung by people who have the best sounding voices that express feelings and moods really well. And then they get the best looking guys and gals to interact with each other on film in tune with the pre-recorded sound-track.
The feelings and moods expressed by the voice-actors naturally guide the visual-actors into expressing the same feelings and moods visually with lip-synching, their facial expressions, and their body movements. Which does look real, spectacular, and hot to the viewer.
I think this technique of guiding visual actors with a pre-recorded sound-track is perfect for making porn films. Because such sound-track guidance that expresses the feelings porn actors are supposed to feel is much easier to understand and to follow for porn stars than anything a film director can tell them to do. And since most porn stars don't have much talent for acting, expressing their feelings, or dirty-talking. They could use a lot of help from such pre-recorded sound-tracks.
I've seen some porn films that were done in reverse of what Bollywood does. Visual porn actors were dubbed by voice actors, after the film was made. And that was really bad. Because the visual actors didn't express their feelings well visually. And voice actors had nothing to work with, even though they were good at expressing feelings with their voices.
Pre-recorded voice tracks really should be the ones to guide the visual actors and not the other way around.
Edited by - Dan on 10/25/2008 10:44:49 AM
skyway
Member

192 Posts
7/06
Posted - Oct 25 2008 : 4:37PM
Pre-recoded vocals=bad idea. Natural sounds are what we want.
I would love to see three or four cameras put into a room and controlled by remote. Film the entire scene with little to no cuts/edits. Just get out of the way and let things happen. Also, all four cameras record the scene, just from different perspectves. Allow the viewer to select any/all cameras to view the scene from. If you have a scene that you watch multiple times, you can freshen it up a bit by viewing from different camera angles. Directors need to learn that, in directing sex scenes, less is more. Scenes can be much hotter without non-performers in the room and without anybody saying cut. Only for real problems should their be cutting. Not to just get a better angle on something etc.
Dan
Senior Member

2056 Posts
6/07
Posted - Oct 25 2008 : 6:49PM
I suggest that you watch some Bollywood movies before you make your judgement. The best looking people quite often don't have the best sounding voices. And it is pretty hard to put a microphone on a naked lady without making this microphone a big distraction for the lady and for the viewer. That's probably another reason why the natural sounds porn stars make often don't sound so good.
There is such a thing as phone sex. Where guys can phone and get an ear full of female dirty talk with lots of groaning and moaning. And many men do get off on this kind of thing.
I see no reason why this type of aural sex shouldn't be combined with visual sex in sync with each other. It would be the best of both worlds.
Many porn-fans complain about the quality of moaning, groaning, and dirty talk in porn films. And there is a good solution to this problem. Get the professional moaners and dirty-talkers to work in sync with the visual performers.
Edited by - Dan on 10/25/2008 6:52:14 PM



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